Please cut the music to fit the movie
The animation is okay but the pace is a bit too quick. Moreover, please cut off the music before the movie loops again.
Please cut the music to fit the movie
The animation is okay but the pace is a bit too quick. Moreover, please cut off the music before the movie loops again.
Simply Great
This is an example of a great Flash. Great sound quality. Great music. Great animation. Excelent visual style. Wonderful.
Good...now I want more.
I loved the style and animation. Frame by frame is hard but this result is worth it. I also see the shading you did which must have taken forever. The music is of great quality. It's a good start. Now let me see what you're going to do with it.
Oh Smeg!
You get points JUST for using Red Dwarf. Plus the Flash looked nice too.
Oh I'm glad :)
Looks good but that it....
This piece does look nice and has a visual style, but other than that...there's no substance beyond the style.
Argh ,i did'nt wanted to make a good substence :P
Fairly Good Flash
You know, this Flash is actually pretty good. There are some flaws, of course, but the story is wacky in a good way, the graphics are nice and it was clear effort and time was put into this piece.
omg it's u!hahhasajdsh;dh;aihfdihahaeuhdhhahahahahhaha
Overload
This Flash clearly took a lot of hard work, and it shows in the final product. The visuals were great, the fights well choreographed and the sound as good as you could get for its length. But therein lies the problem with this Flash. It is inexcusably long and at times borders on overkill. While I appreciate the options to skip the logo and introduction, the problem is these very things are simply too stretched out to begin with. It would have been better to divide this movie further into different files, especially since you have the scenes broken up already.
The other problem is too much action. More specifically the pacing is almost completely nonexistent. There needs to be some rest in between each sequence or else it all comes together in a mess. You planned every blow and positioned every sprite in its proper place. Let the audience actually get a glimpse of the work you've done instead of being overwhelmed by the lights and colors. Then give them a little time to soak it in.
heh..yeh it's supposed to be extremely fast paced. My intention was to make it as intense as possible, and avoid it from being "boring" in any way. By the way, the 2nd part of this movie will be submitted by next week or so, then part 3 a few days after....
There's nothing to say, except that I like watching Flash movies on Newgrounds.
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